The Story of the Heart - Ellie's Journey

The Story of the Heart - Ellie's Journey
I'm sorry Ells,-


point.of.view Alfons Lee


My name is Alfons Lee, No one can explain myself more than this sentence;


I'm a very sinful jerk and I let down Ellie, the girl who means the most to my life and loves the most.


June 2007


Ellie's 18th birthday.


I dressed up for dinner with Ellie. I was looking at my reflection in the mirror when Lucky, my closest friend, walked into a suite for guys.


Lucky: "Udah deh bro, so handsome already you!"


Alfons: "Yes, I know". I posed like a model.


Lucky: "Ih unclean". Said sebal.


"Oh yeah, I checked the camera where Ellie's surprise was. Preparation is okay. Anyway


everything you said was ready".


Alfons:"Flower?"


Lucky: "God".


Alphons:"Cake"?


Lucky:"Can Lu say, that's mah readyin at the resto?"


I nodded slowly.


Lucky: "Just calm down, all you need to do is get ready".


Alfons: "Thanks very bro". Sincerely said. Then take a long breath.


Lucky: "Yes! Oye! Why are you so sad? I told you everything was ready, I assure you".


I nodded again.


Lucky: "Don't tell me you're still with the mind - a guy who is upset because he's afraid his girl cheated on him during the LDR?!


Kan Lu himself who wants, how do you want to convince Ellie if her Lu also not sure?"


Alfonso: "Yes, must be. Like I said this is for my future, Mami and Ellie themselves".


Lucky: "Yes, I don't have a lot of thoughts. Follow the t#i kayak flow that is poured after it so follow the aer".


Alfons: "Basic pictor! Should her parable be ta# ??"


Lucky: "I want you to relax, don't strain too much". He comforted me.


But I still can't calm down.


Alfons: "What if I were, you wouldn't be scared at all? What am I overdoing Ky? Seriously nanya".


Lucky: "Truly..... I'll be scared too, like Lu.


What's crazy, a girl as pretty as Ellie, which guy doesn't like it?


I'm sure yah. When you leave, the boys will crush him.


And if I could be honest, if you're not my best friend, I'd like Ellie's Fons am".


Alfons: "The thing is, Ellie ain't gonna want to be with you!"


Lucky: "You sure? Belom of course again!


Let's think again, even if Ellie's pretty like an angel.


He's not an angel either.


He's like Fons, like we're ordinary people with weaknesses.


It's like yes,.--"


Alfons: "By the way t#i again, I'm throwing you into the pool". I cut .


Lucky: "Yeee is a vengeful base! This is me talking about the seriousness of Fons was Lu just my opinion. 


Ellie was a loyal girl all along.


But for example, later he LDR - and the same Elu, trus there is a guy whose criteria are not far from you.


Keep her jolting Ellie like you did her first.


Which girl wouldn't be tempted? he didn't want to be with Lu at first either!


And the important thing is that guy is deket, real in front of Ellie.


You're far away,-


can't get him to eat, nurse him sick, can't keep getting him etc.


And suppose you die calling him again.


He's been hounding comfortable with that guy"


Alfons: "Thank you Ky, I've made more and more nge-down".


Lucky:"Ups, sorry bro. This is again sharing . I said realistic."


Alfons: " So what should I do? So that Ellie will always be faithful, and I won't lose her".


Lucky: " Yes if I do, just sleep Fons. She said the girl was.."


Before Lucky continued, I threw him with an object near me.


Lucky: "Don't be angry first, bro, relax, be horrified first.


You have 1 step ahead of him.


He should be heavy on Elu.


Choose you finally.


Alfons: "Bar bar is your way?


Demonic entry waiting for the hotel like Lu. I don't want to!!


She's also not going to want to, which I'm going to be stabbed by Ellie".


Lucky: "Pake donk bro trick, but Lu see". He pointed to the small table in the suite.


I followed the direction of the index, and saw there were many alcoholic drinks of various brands that were deliberately prepared at the request of men - men for us to drink alone.


I glared and pointed my middle finger at Lucky.


Alfons: "Big no".


Lucky - Ellie - Lee



• ~~~~~~•


After finishing dinner and explaining my intentions and reasons for going to school abroad.


I went to Ellie for a minute to go to the toilet, to call Lucky for help lighting a candle in the surprise room right now and making sure everything I ordered once again was properly prepared with no mistakes.


Because Ellie and I are going to be there soon. And he swore everything was as I ordered.


But there was something in my conversation with Ellie earlier, that bothered me. And before I hang up,-


"Wait bro wait! Waita! Wait ! " I urge Lucky not to hang up the phone .


"What's? What the hell?" Lucky surprise.


"Gue thought about Ky.


I want to take your advice, please move some alcohol in our camera to Ellie's surprise room.


But I'm asking you not to let our other friends know." I said.


"Huh?? You sure are Fons? You didn't agree." Lucky answered across the phone.


"Surely, because what Lu's talking about is real, and I'd go crazy if I really lost Ellie". I'm explaining.


"Okay if you're sure, I'll help.


Oh yes Fons, ntar I simple security (ko#dom) - it's in the drawer bedside only yes". Lucky said again.


"Crazy ! Don't use k#ndom-kond#m everything is Ky. Later Ellie thinks I - pro-who always take ko#dom where."


I frantically involuntarily hardened and raised my tone of voice.


"I know you're not a pro! How will Ellie get pregnant? Kan you also still belom can be meried now-now". Lucky reminded me.


I was surprised to hear one of the doors of Wc open, it turns out that in the toilet there is not only me.


The man came out and looked at me furiously, I took a step back in fear for no reason. Was he angry listening to my conversation with Lucky earlier? But I don't remember knowing this guy, it doesn't seem to be Ellie's acquaintance either.


I'm getting out quick.


"Ky's school, I'll watch 5 minutes" I hung up my phone.


•  ~~~~~~ •


The next morning, after that night I drove home in my car alone. We had a fight, but before this we very rarely fought. 


Ellie's mad at me, she doesn't want a car with me. He chose to go home with another friend.


I want to be with Ellie right now, but I don't want to push her too much either.


Ellie needs time.


If I were him, I'd act similarly. Probably worse than Ellie.


The streets are quite quiet because it may still be early in the morning.


After about 17km I was driving from the hotel, arrived 1 black jeep car overtaking my car .


I slammed the steering wheel to dodge it, and luckily stepped on the brakes in time.


Two men got out of the car in the direction of my car.


I wonder why those two are angry? They are wrong.


Then I realized these two people were deliberately looking for trouble.


I am lazy to deal with them.


I quickly rewind my car, drive my car to the right of the road and


avoid hitting them.


Then stepping on my car's gas as fast as he left them. People lack of work, fortunately I survived. I thought at the time.


Illustration-Ellie and Lee at dinner (Ellie pake high heels yes, so high😄)



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