Angker Village

Angker Village
Ghost of Luis


"I feel like I saw someone passing by?" ask Idar.


I tried to get out of my house, no one was everywhere. The sound of a stone throwing towards my house was heard, but no stone or anything was thrown into my house. I went back in to see the others.


"What's the matter Luis?" ask my dad who's out too.


"No well, there was a shadow passing by and a stone throw was heard. When I checked, there was nothing outside" I told my father.


"Oh, just ignore it if it doesn't bother you," said my father back to the room.


"You're sure Luis, there's nobody you see outside?" ask Dion.


"No,"


"Maybe you didn't notice clearly" Dion said back.


"My eyes are still healthy, Dion,"


"Is Marni coming?" suddenly said Idar.


"We are seriously talking about him, so he came to visit us" Ana continued.


"Marni where it may come, he it's night out. If you want to meet Marni's ghost, go straight to her house just test her guts." Answer Dion.


"Dion wants to test the guts, once it's up, the guts are gone" I said insinuating.


"Sorry Luis, that night was different. It feels creepy" replied Dion.


"Everything is creepy for Dion" Ana said.


"Well, it's really creepy, if you don't believe me, just check Marni's house tonight." Bela Fani's.


"You and Dion are the same, timid," said Grace.


"From you guys arguing it's not clear, tonight we're going to Marni's house. Grace and Ana, one team. Dion and Fani, one team. You prove to the team who will win" I said clearly.


"What do we want Luis to do?" ask Grace.


"Who's team has been inside Marni's house the longest, she's the winner" I said clearly.


"sister, I want to come" said Idar.


"May, my friend be a judge" I replied.


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At night, I and Idar headed to Marni's house as promised to my friends. On the way, the dog continues to bark incessantly. Me and Idar held each other, to allay the fear.


"Son, has the others arrived yet?" ask Idar.


"I don't know, it should have arrived. It's past seven, '" I replied.


Idar and I went quiet again. I felt like someone was following me. Hit my feet right behind me. I turned towards Idar, he was still relaxed like he did not hear the sound of footsteps behind him.


"Dad.., dad.please mother.." He said what sounded right in my ear.


I stopped walking and remained silent for a moment. Idar was confused to see me.


"Sister, why stop?"


"You didn't hear his voice just now?" I said to my sister. Idar immediately shook his head.


"Whose voice, brother Luis?" tanyakanya.


"Forget it, we go to Marni's house" I said, returning to walk. I don't want my sister to be thoughtful and scared.


This voice, I have heard many times. When I came to Ana's house, I heard it too. I was wondering who he really was. Only I can hear his voice, my sister can't.


Dion, Fani, Grace, and Ana are in front of Marni's house. I guess they must have been waiting.


"Luis, why are you taking so long?" yelled Dion who was impatient.


"I'm sorry, I was on purpose" I said as I approached them.


"Based on Luis, if I knew you'd be late, I'd have picked you up, for sure" Dion said, winking his eyes.


While I was busy with my friends, the voice I heard appeared again. This time it sounded heartbreaking and sad.


"Dad... Please Mommy..." He said that like a crying voice.


"Luis?" asked Ana who patted my shoulder.


"Are you okay, Luis?"


"Yes, I heard the voice coming back" I said to Ana.


"Voice, what sound?" ask Ana. I was amazed, only I could hear it. Ana alone, did not hear him that clearly had an inner eye as well.


"It seems like this voice is for me. Only I can hear it," my inner self inwardly.


"It's okay, Ana. I just misheard," I said, dismissing Ana's suspicions.


"Yes already" Ana replied briefly. I looked around, finding nothing. But, I kind of stepped on something that hard I feel.


"Friends, what's under me?" I said I didn't want to look down.


"What's Luis' brother?" ask Idar who is standing near me.


"Something touched my feet" I said, making my friends look at each other.


Fani hit Dion on the head, and said: "Dion, you look at Luis' feet. Who's holding his leg!" fani's orders.


"I don't want to, fear." Answer Dion.


"What if we look at it together?" said Ana.


"One.two.three.." said we compact counting.


I immediately looked down, I was surprised when I saw someone who looked like me.


"Luis' ghost, Luis's ghost," said Idar, pointing to the figure.


"Right, there's Luis' ghost here" Dion said.


People who look like me, always look at me when I see them too. I tried to move my hand, she also moved her hand.


"Luis, he did everything you did" Ana said.


This guy who looks like me, is so small as if he's locked up. There is a pink color nearby. I grabbed it, and it turned out to be just a mirror. My shadow reflected in the mirror.


"Who said Luis' ghost?" I stared hard at my friends.


"It's not me, Idar who started first" pointed Dion.


"I told you where Luis' ghost is" Sahut Fani.


"When did you say that?" ask Dion who is looking towards Fani.


"Barusan," Fani immediately laughed at Dion's expression.


"Here we go, let's just start testing the guts." I said that made Dion and Fani freeze.


"The door of Marni's house is twofold. Behind the same front. You just have to go in front or back." I said that explained it.


"Luis, I'm equally Graceful through the back," said Fani who raised her hand. Grace nodded in agreement.


"OKAY. Means Fani and Dion through the front door." I ordered.


Dion raised his hand as if he wanted to say something.


"Luis, can I cancel the guts test? me and Fani came yesterday,"


"Yesterday was not a test of guts. We're just getting in,"


"But it remains the same. Me and Fani go in together, too."


"Dion, if you're afraid you don't have to find excuses. So men must be manly and brave" said the smiling Grace mocking.


"As far as I am. But Luis, if you don't mind, Idar comes with me and Fani. Let it be crowded" replied Dion.


"Then Luis, where are you going to keep it?" idar.


"They can too. Let me and Luis get closer, '" replied Dion.


"Me and Idar stay here as judges. You guys come in and meet Marni if you're lucky" I said.


Ana and Grace move first. Semnetara Dion and Fani, seem to still think. Not long after, Dion slowly opened the door of Marni's house in front. They both entered, although they walked slowly. I looked around to find something suspicious.Not for long, the voice I heard came back.


I looked around, right under the tree a black-colored figure appeared. I can't see clearly. But he is like a human. His head and hair were clearly visible in the dark.