My name is Miss
Critical longing

it suddenly sounded rowdy from outside the Gladys nursing ward.

"What's wrong Dys? how noisy is it outside?" ask Nara.

"Normally there are those who are in a critical or critical state of Ra" Gladys replied.

tap..tap.tap.(heard footsteps approaching them both).

"Papa?" Nara was surprised when she looked and saw the presence of Besari.

" oh papa thinks papa's wrong room." said Besari relaxed.

gladys pulled Nara's hand, then raised his eyebrows.

"Eh yes Dys, this is my papa. Papa, this is Gladys." Nara introduces her papa and Gladys.

Gladys was surprised, immediately confirmed his sitting position and greeted papa Nara.

"Hopefully recover quickly, son." said Besari corroborated.

"Thank you for that." Gladys smiled.

Then they continued talking while enjoying the fruits brought by Besari.

other angle RS

" y Allah sir, how is this?" Bu Inggit was crying, his eyes were puffy, his voice was raucous. How not, some time ago Miss can move her fingers, momentarily clear water dripped from the corner of her eyes. When he called the doctor, the doctor said the condition is critical.

" patience, ma'am, calm down.we ask the Gusti of God to return the Longs to us." Mr. Budi who just arrived from the pharmacy to redeem the prescription of the Missing medicine given by the nurse, surprised yet.

This morning only the two of them took care of Miss, after Nek Danur and Tejo came home after dawn.how not to worry about the feeling of Bu Inggit, who is not afraid, when facing critical Miss while she is alone in the treatment room.

He had thought that a moving finger signified good progress, in fact he was critical.

30 Minutes later, the medical team did not leave the room.

after 45 minutes, the doctor came out of the room with a facial expression that was difficult to interpret.

" How is the condition of Miss Doc?she's okay, Doc?" cecar Bu Inggit's.

" quiet yes ma'am earlier miss critical, even the heartbeat had stopped.." the doctor explained, taking a deep breath and then slowly exhaling.

" then what's doc?" mr. Budi glazed.

" Alhamdulillah Rindu still have the spirit of life, he returned even though he was still in a coma. I hope the father and mother are patient and do not forget to always ask God, because He is the Most Healer." doctor corroborates.

" thank you doc, Alhamdulillah.then when about Miss will realize?" ask Bu Inggit.

" we'll just wait Mom, hopefully soon.we can only pray for now."....

" diligent mother, father invites Rin to speak."

" thank you again doctor" said Mr. Budi.

" well then I stay first Mr. Ma." the doctor also left the couple. Then they finally entered the room.

" *Home? is she my daughter? ah but that woman was not Erna. Her face was completely different. No, it's definitely not my daughter. I'm sure my camplon is fine. Erna must have taken good care of him. Ah camplon, I miss you Nduk.

Miss, whoever you are in that room, may you soon be aware of your coma." bathin Besari who accidentally heard the talk of the doctor and the patient's family when he was going home with Nara.

"Hindu? like papa's daughter's name? does he miss my sister? but her parents are complete.ah might just be a coincidence. O Allah, may my brother miss be fine wherever he is. May papa be able to meet brother Longing soon. Aamiiinnn." bathin Nara*.

They stepped out of the hospital, got in the car and rushed home.

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"Allahu Akbar, Allahu Akbar.." I heard sayup-sayup adhan Isha.

" well, you go first, I don't want to miss being alone." Bu Inggit answered without looking at her husband.The fixed gaze leads to a beautiful girl whose face is now pale.

" Okay, you go first, ma'am." Budi went to the hospital mushala.

15 Minutes later, someone entered the treatment room. Bu Inggit looked at the sound of the footsteps.

" natalox." ...

" wa'allaikumsallam, who is it?" ask Bu Inggit.

" sorry Mom, I'm Kemal. I'm a classmate Miss. how is Miss Bu?" kemal.

" So long still comatose son, hmm how do you know Miss in the care?" ask Bu Inggit.

the flashback

"What about the rame-rame?" said Ridho who just arrived at school.

" I don't know." said a friend of his.

out of curiosity, he rushed towards Mading. How shocked Ridho was when he arrived in front of Mading.

"What the fuck!" exciting Ridho.

"What's the big race?!" exclaim Kemal who just arrived in front of Mading.

" The attention of all" yuhuuu shouted one student.

" this is the most shocking news, I managed to get an exclusive photo of the relationship between the Einstein girl who is pretentious alias Miss Besari was not as innocent as you thought gays..." shouted this schoolgirl with a cynical face while pointing at the photo attached to the mading board.

" so, for you guys especially the guys who are hypnotized with his innocent cocky behavior, woyy awarir! she's just a pretentious woman, but cheap, stick it here!" exclaim the student who is none other than Gloria. her babble and welcome the cheer of her 2 best friends, Nawang and Andin.

"Stop, watch what you say!" shouted a student whose face was in the photo shown by the blonde girl.

" oh here comes the man who just got his tease the seductive girl, hahaha" he laughed mockingly. That is what Ibra felt. His hand almost slapped Gloria in the face, but was prevented by Kemal.

"Sans brother, don't play hands. Wherever she is a girl. Don't pantes we're flirting with girls." Kemal calms Ibra.

"Lo also Glo, klo Lo envies the same Miss, no way! norak Lo!" Kemal slapped Gloria down with his words.

suddenly the students who were huddling earlier laughed at Kemal's words.

"People with spite are not sane, right?" said a student.

"Ah not clear,huuu." said another.

And eventually the crowd dispersed themselves. While Gloria and her friends are glued in front of the mading.

"Damn it!" shouted Gloria.

X-IPA Class 1

"How come you're not here yet?" Kemal.

And until the hour of the lesson ended, misses not coming, nor is there news. This made Kemal panic. He also wanted to visit Miss after school.

cring.. cring...

After the bell rang, Kemal rushed to the parking lot. Immediately he drove his Scoopy motorbike to Miss' house.

Homesick

Arriving in front of the house Missing, Kemal immediately parked his motorbike and walked towards the door of the house Missing.

tock.tok..

"Assalamualaikum" Kemal greeted.

"Assalamualaikum" again he said a greeting. but there is no sahutan.

" where are the people in this house? kok deserted" kemal batin.

"Assalamualaikum." Still no answer. Tetiba Kemal was surprised because someone patted his shoulder from behind.