
This is my first novel, where I don't know how to write a semicolon. Action dialogues and tag dialogues.
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Ciiiiit
Brucks
"Yetoooo."
A woman and a small child suddenly bounced violently, after a Car hit him very hard.
Tap
Tap
Tap
"Suster, please save these two, please take care of them sisters."
"Okay sir, it's good that you wait here first."
The operating room was closed, Kenan looked frustrated.
Tring tring tring
{assalamineteen. Mi sorry I'm late coming home, I sash Mi, now in hospital}
{Astagfirullah Pah? how is the patient?}
{Now coma Mi, this is still brought to the operating room}
{Astagfirullah reward, hopefully it's okay}
{Udah used to Mi yes, Rado need not be told first, later he panicked}
{Good Pah}
{Assalamualaikum
{Wa aleikumussalam}
Chequelek
"How's sus?" ask Kenan.
"They're fine, just bruised and shocked, they'll soon be conscious."
"Thank God" he said.
Kenan sat in the waiting room.
Chequelek
The patient was taken to the hospital room, Kenan followed.
Kenan was forced to sleep to look after them, because there was no identity, when calling one of his coworkers, they did not know the origin of his family.
Morning at 08:00
"Davians.au, sakiits."
The woman seemed to have woken up, a girl who looked young.
"Miss you're awake?"
"Who are you?"
"Sorry Miss, I grazed you yesterday."
"You're sick, brother, sakiiit."
"Davians...Oh you're hurt bad."
"Sorry Miss, what's your name?"
"I'm Laras, and this is my brother Davian."
"I'm sorry, I'm going to pay for your life, until you're fully healed, you rest here, until you're allowed to go home."
Since then Kenan went back and forth to the hospital until 5 days later.
"Today you can go home, let's get ready, let me drop you off."
"Thank you, sir,"
They cleaned up and prepared to go home.
The tiny rented Laras residence that is inside a small alley.
"You guys stay here?
"Yes, sir." They go inside and talk a lot, Kenan lun feels sympathy, they just live together, his mother dies, while his father remarries and never sees them again.
"You don't have to worry, I'll finance you, you don't hesitate."
Since then Kenan has often stopped by Laras without the knowledge of his wife and child.
"Well, do you want to accompany me on the road today?"
"Where is Mister?"
"If you're not busy, then come!"
"Aren't you angry with your family?"
"We're just walking, nothing."
"All right, sir."
"Don't call Mister, just call me Mas ya."
"Mm, is that okay?"
"It's okay."
Since they often walk together over time the seed of love grows, regardless of age. Kenan 45
laras is only 22 years old. Eventually, the brand decided to marry Sirri.
First night 22.00
"Davian, tonight you stay with bi nuri yes, I want to nemenin mas Kenan out of town."
"Okay, sister, don't forget to bring souvenirs."
"Good baby."
The barrel is walking
towards the Gang, because Kenan was already waiting for him there.
"Where dear is Davian sulking, for not being brought?"
"No, he's used to living, when I work."
"Wait a minute, I gotta call my wife first."
Tring tring tring
{Mi, I did not go home today, there is a sudden business outside the border city, our company there is a little problem}
{Wa aleikumussalam Baik lah}
{Eh, forgot assalamualaikum}
{Be careful Pah yes, ease smoothly}
{aamiin, yes Mi, already yes asalamualaikum}
{Waalaikumsalam}
The barrel of a pin seemed to rest its head on Kenan's spoiled shoulder.
"Hemmm, can't wait, let's go."
Along the way they were just joking and romancing the rich new bride. They have also reached the destination of the hotel on the edge of the City.
After booking their room, they entered.
"Darling, come here." Kenan also embraces his little wife in his lap.
"Are you ready hemm." Baras looked embarrassed and just nodded.
"This is a gift for you."
"What is this Bang?"
"Open up first."
Kreeeeks
"Huh....? whatisthis? how rich is Hama Mas's nest?"
"...." - ".Kenan just smiled.
"Well, I'll wear it."
After entering the bathroom and cleaning himself, Laras took a shower and changed his clothes.
Chequelek
"........!!!" Kenan was dumbstruck to see the scene in front of him, how not, the pure white petite body was so dazzling in his eyes.
"Mas, don't be so shy ah.
Finally they are lulled by the caress of their partner's affection, until they completely forget the impact of all that later.
Kenan Residence.
"Ummi, which papa, why not dinner?"
"She had an impromptu meeting of Do, he said outside the city taking care of the company at the border."
"Cock impromptu Mi?"
"Because the matter is also impromptu Do, let's eat it later to go cold."
Prang
"Look."
"Mi, why, how come gini?"
Mamah Rado accidentally dropped a glass that was nudged by his own elbow.
"Bi please sweep ya, ummi's okay?"
"No papa kok Nak. You just eat yes, ummi feels dizzy."
Mamah Rado walked towards her room, as her head suddenly turned dizzy.
Is it true meeting? All right, I'll investigate.
Tring tring tring
{Pak, does the company have any problems?}
{No Young master, fine kok}
{If the company is out of town how?}
{Also there is no problem, this morning we have checked there to check the sales and others.}
{Good Sir, thanks.}
Tuuuut
Oooh it turns out, Papah has dared to mess around, it's appropriate for this month papah often come home tonight, is it possible papah cheating?
"Young Master, why isn't the rice in the eating?"
Suddenly Aunt surprised her daydream.
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Morning's approaching.
Kenan tightened his embrace on the body of his tiny wife who still had.
"We take a bath yu Mas!
"Hemmm, ah males."
"Cock males?"
"For dooong, hem."
"Mas, it hurts to know."
Kenan really did not want to let go of his embrace, until that day they just spent time in bed.
3days they're out of town, time to go home.
"I'm sorry I don't want to be separated from you, but how else, we have to keep this a secret."
Kenan said while hugging his wife's tiny body from behind when he wanted to get out of the hotel.
"Come, later Mas's wife even suspicious."
Eventually, they left the room with each other.
Deg
That's Rado's dad, who's he with? does Rado have a little sister, as far as I know, she's an only child?
A pair of eyes looked astonished to see the intimacy of Kenan and Laras who had just come out of the Hotel.
This, I have to tell Rado.
Checkered
the man also photographed Kenan and Laras who were holding together tightly, like a new bride.
Clack
message sent. directly tick blue.
While Rado seemed to be clenching his grasp, his molars also rang out holding back anger.
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"Ummi, today Rado there are activities with friends, likely to nginap mi, may?" Rado who was standing on the stairs, waiting for an answer from his ummi who was sitting casually on the sofa, please be anxious.
"Which order Do?" ummi turned her head towards Rado.
"What's common is Alfi, Jihad is also Zidan mi, can you?" Ask Rado again
"Try calling your dad first, can you?" the ummi again.
"Ah, ummi, if papa right slalu can, even those who often do not ngizinin it from ummi right?" Add Rado again.
"How many days do you? a day, right?" Ask ummi again, frowning without turning her head.
"yes mi, it's like a day" replied Rado again.
"yes, but be careful yes, guarded courtesy, if you get to the temen house, or wherever you are, do not make the shame ummi and papa ya!?" Ummi's advice.
"yes mi, thank you, Rado wants to be ready first." Rado walked into his room. After putting the prayer mat, clean clothes and other necessities into his backpack, he went back down.
"mi, Rado's leaving yeah." Rado salim and cipika cipiki are the same ummi.
"Be careful, don't bring girls, danger" said Ummi again.
"Yes, I must be, assalamualaikum." Rado stepped out into the garage.
"Wa aleikumussalam." Ummi brought her to the door.
"Why are you home?" when sending Rado to the front, it turns out papa Rado also arrived from his work.
"Yes mi, papa there is work out of town for a few days, please provide clothes and other necessities yes mi! papa's gonna take a shower!" papa stepped towards the back. He looks into the kitchen maybe want a drink first.
"To suddenly pa? Rado also just came out, ummi alone dong pa?"
"And there's auntie mi, uncle's garden and security guard in the back house, don't be afraid!" He sounded a little screaming from the kitchen.
"If so this way, Rado did not have to go with his friends." murmured ummi while cleaning papa clothes and other necessities.
"Mi, later do not need to call papa yes, except papa who calls first, fear papa again meeting." Papa's word to ummi who is still busy is in order.
"Yes pa, but not meeting the same girl?" ummi glanced at papa while slightly smiling.
"Ummi can only be the most beautiful ummi in papa's eyes, nothing else, don't worry!" Papa hugs ummi from behind, looks though not young anymore, but they look very harmonious.
"Ah Papa, this, it's done! " ummi also towed the living room suitcase, followed by papa from behind.
after cipika cipiki papa also leave.
"Be careful, yes! why not use an office driver? time to drive yourself?" ask ummi wonder.
"No mi, his wife's driver is sick, his little son kasian klo left at night, already yes assalamualaikum."
"Wa alaikumussalam warahmatullah." ummi also waved his hand, and looked at papa's car until it was lost at the fence, ummi went into the house and returned to relax in the guest room.
"Bi..tonight do not need to cook, we order food outside, Rado and papa nginep outside the problem!" Ummi's voice slightly raised so that the aunt in the kitchen heard.
"Yes, what would He want, let auntie buy in the future, many of His delicious in the front stall." Aunt approaching ummi.
"Is there no honey?"
"Mmm what is Madam like? aunt hasn't heard." Aunt was confused
ummi just smiled.
"This I order first yes, wait in front, I want to take a shower first, it's 4 o'clock want to pray ashar first " after ordering through online.Ummi also departed from his seat and went to his room to bathe and pray ashar.
"Yes, Madam." Aunty turned to the kitchen to tidy up the leftover lunch.
Tong
"Package." A woman's voice sounded from the front
"Wait for mbak." Aunty looks rushed to the front of the house.
"Get in first, mbak, for a second, I'll call Madam?" Aunty also immediately headed to the ummi room, before Bibi knocked on the door it turned out ummi first who opened the door.
"What culinary do we order?"
Aunt nodded and they headed for the living room together.
"How much mbak?" it looks like the woman is identical to the ummi age range of 40-45
"30 grand, just the right money."
ummi spent 100 thousands.
"No need to be back in, make mbak aja." ummi is good, generous, even ni ya he often for money or just rice wrap for orphanages inhabited santri lodging. Maybe the generosity of Pa Kenan increased sustenance, there was never a word of crisis in his company. Kenan company in the field of convection is very advanced, even has hundreds of employees.
"Let's eat." My aunt brought a chicken box to the kitchen. And serve it at the dinner table. They also eat together. Since ummi never distinguished Auntie, she already considered like her own family.
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On the way to the waterfall mountain, Rado and friends look happy, because he left at 3 pm they were overnight on the trip, so they had to stay in the village.
"Is there no lodging here? did we put up a tent?" said Zidan while busy eating a snack.
"We ask the same father there, it's almost magrib too, if there is no, we sleep in the mosque? no papa too, besides the village is not rich in the city, there are most dogs." And Jihad again
"All right." Rado went down and approached his father.
"I'm sorry, is there an inn?" Ask Rado.
"Hadang hulululah(wait first)." south borneo language neng. โบ
"Din oo din, is there ah kaguringan kasan ni kakan there batakun? "
(din, is there lodging? this is her teenage son).
"It's the heat, lun is ungodly."
(wait, yeah, I asked)
"Hello, bam, is there ah again nang empty panginapan banyu hot ti? there is batakun nih."
(helo, bam, is there any lodging? someone else is looking for it)
the one called udin nodded his head while occasionally saying oo.
"Sorry Banar, he said there's no mas."
language si udin belepotan, understandably accustomed to malay language.
"Ooh is that, my mom? think there's a place we can sleep tonight? we want mountains, but it's already night, no time."
"Amun hakun is here ai bamalam." said the father
(if you want, just stay here)
" Iih kawa aj mas." said udin chimed in
(yes, I can do it)
"Can you pa? we're staying here, not a potluck."
They ended up at Udin's place. They were very nice and even hosted dinner by mama Udin. Simple wooden house, no refrigerator or television, a dish of dry iwak and omelet, eating together feels good. When sitting in the house.
"Will you walk up to the heat, there's the pool, let the gene night look at the heat of the song"
(What do you want to walk up, into the hot water?there's your pool, even if the water stays hot at night)
"really?come on!" zidan looked enthusiastic.
because the place in question is not too far only 100 meters away they are only on foot. Arriving there.
Just got to the front of the hot water gate.
"Oh, my stomach hurts, ouch." Rado seemed to grimace withstanding her stomach ache. He also sat helpless.
"What is this, what is going on?" Jihad panicked a little and approached Rado who had arrived first.
"My stomach hurts, let's go back, I'm not strong."
"alright, but did we get the car first?" ask Zidan
"No, I'm strong, you know."
Rado stretched his hand to the shoulders of jihad and zidan, while Udin held a flashlight, knowing the dim street lights are dim.
"Ai, kada so ah, then one hundred banar?"
(what's not going there?ko for a second?)
"Anu ma ai, this pain grate jar."
(anu ma, he has a stomachache)
" Ooh, white wood oil shoes if you catch a cold, at night, so it's a pain to grate you."
(olese eucalyptus oil, it is possible to catch a cold, late at night, so catch a cold)๐
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To the next day, they continued their journey to the mountain waterfall on the way. Passing through the hot tears Rado's eyes looking for something. To the extent that he sat in the back so that his friends did not see what he was watching. It seems like last night's stomach ache was just an excuse, there was a secret there.