
So here the author wants to justify something. This is because I am still a beginner so it does not escape the error, when I had time to read this story again from episode 1 , I read after getting a complaint of words and miswriting the name of the character, so embarrassed it feels, want to be improved just can not anymore.
As for his piety it is a lot of writing typonya nih friend, and there is also a lot of word wastage in each episode, (excuse me yes).
And 1 more for her mother's character named "BINA" Anel, but I've written her name a lot of times, I wrote her name in several episodes with the name "ROSA" she is also a mother in my other story.
The same actually in some of my stories, I like to put the characters wrong, (sorry yes everything, you guys so hard to read it well)
My next mistake was the lack of use of punctuation marks and also the misplacement of punctuation.(sometimes I forget the use of punctuation for friends)
So the author hopes the reader to comment on each episode when I am wrong in writing the character, the sentence or the placement of the punctuation. I really need the criticism from all of you so that my work can be even better.
Let sam help ya.
And when giving criticism should be worthy, for example not hurting each other's feelings well certainly.
Okay all I hope a lot for your help. And once please vote well ;)
So the author wants to give his visual images al,anel, fira, and aldi
For visual al: Wafda Saifan
Name: Alfyan Pratama
Character character: cold, but friendly, indifferent but actually attentive.
For visual aldi is the Duke of Dolken
Name: Aldi Adi Winata
Character character: Loving, humorous, meek
For visual angel namely, Princess Marino
Name: Anello Evinho Since
Character character: Always cheerful, have their own thoughts, humoris and easy to get along.
Name: Musfira
Character character: jolly, humorous, funny, best friend
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To my readers the author of Ichi may say thank you very much for wanting to read my work, and also I apologize for the discomfort
her in reading. I will try to do better in the future so that readers are comfortable in reading and also do not get bored to continue reading my work.
Because #home-teens the author so much free time and can often update every day.
Author plans to collect criticism and suggestions in the next episode later, please help yes.
The author does not mean like being collecting comments, I just need income in order to make my work better in the future.
So from the author apologize if the rules of writing are not in order, again the author apologizes as much as possible if there is a mistake.
Author humpang promotion yes, read also other works author, there is also the title:
*Sailor love
*Alya's dream
*reset
The author said first, thank you very much for reading, the author wants to continue writing new episode episodes for today.
Please wait, the author will immediately type hehehehe.
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#don't forget the vote
THANK YOU FOR READING**